tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-388718870238539722.post2590332573906356466..comments2021-02-18T19:02:57.624-05:00Comments on Memoirs By: Me Journal: The First Moment of...The SixtiesCarriehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17471887817084961722noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-388718870238539722.post-6391504242563127742011-11-12T19:08:00.300-05:002011-11-12T19:08:00.300-05:00I'm also a chld of the 1950's who came of ...I'm also a chld of the 1950's who came of age inthe late 'Sixties...and I also write memoir essays about that era, and the 'Seventies,on my blog. I enjoyed this, and particuarly liked the opening...countdown to 1960...great image.Lynne Spigelmire Vitihttp://stillinschool.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-388718870238539722.post-84866685397358394962009-08-27T01:20:19.577-04:002009-08-27T01:20:19.577-04:00Joe: I was there in that room with you, and I reme...Joe: I was there in that room with you, and I remember it as if it were yesterday. I will remember forever the look of dispair and disbelief on Mr.Pianka's face.<br />Elmer Kuber <br />you can google or facebook me. I am the only one with this name..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-388718870238539722.post-75971547983410824812008-09-02T18:33:00.000-04:002008-09-02T18:33:00.000-04:00use more discriptions and talk about yourself spec...use more discriptions and talk about yourself specifically when you describe emotions. Tell us how you feel not how everyone feels. I love your story! Just a little tweeking, but it's great.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-388718870238539722.post-22284444661634926692008-09-02T18:28:00.000-04:002008-09-02T18:28:00.000-04:00check for run on sentences, but a very interesting...check for run on sentences, but a very interesting peices.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com